Editor's synthesis & decision
Minor RevisionRevision requests
- Provide a more nuanced discussion of the fatty acid binding pockets, explicitly addressing why their disruption does not impact entry efficiency in your current assay systems.
- Temper the claims regarding zoonotic risk and cross-species transmission, explicitly acknowledging that receptor binding is a necessary but insufficient condition for host infection and that in vitro results do not account for host-specific factors like TMPRSS2.
- Include raw data or histograms for the tripartite fluorescence assays to demonstrate that observed reductions in fluorescence are not due to differential protein expression.
- Include a positive control in the cross-species entry assays to confirm the functionality of the human ACE2 construct.
- Clarify the kinetic fitting for the BLI sensorgrams and address the potential for mass transport limitations or binding heterogeneity.
Where this could be published
At its current quality
Solid specialist journals in virology and structural biology
- Journal of Virology
- Viruses
- Journal of Structural Biology
Then you could realistically aim for
Highly selective broad-interest journals in the life sciences
- Nature Communications
- PLOS Pathogens
- eLife
The current work is well-suited for high-quality specialist journals, but reaching a broader-audience venue requires a more sophisticated integration of the structural findings with a deeper, more cautious biological discussion of host-range barriers. The most important improvement is to shift the narrative from 'zoonotic risk' to 'molecular mechanisms of receptor adaptation'. This guidance is not a guarantee of acceptance, and you must verify the current novelty of your findings against a live literature search before submission.
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Reviewer comments — reproduced in full, unabridged
Reviewer 1
gemini-flash-lite-latestThis manuscript presents the cryo-EM structures of the HKU5 spike protein and its receptor-binding domain (RBD) in complex with the ACE2 orthologs from the bat Pipistrellus abramus and the bird Pitta sordida. The authors demonstrate that HKU5 utilizes a unique binding interface compared to other known ACE2-using coronaviruses and identify fatty acid binding pockets that stabilize the spike protein in a closed conformation. Through functional assays, including pseudovirus entry and cell-cell fusion, the authors establish that HKU5 can utilize avian ACE2 for entry, suggesting a broader host range than previously assumed for this lineage. The work is technically rigorous, utilizing high-resolution structural biology and complementary biochemical assays to support its conclusions. The findings provide a valuable, detailed characterization of HKU5 receptor recognition and its potential for cross-species transmission, fitting well within the scope of a high-impact specialist journal.
Strengths
- High-resolution cryo-EM structures of both the full-length spike and the RBD-receptor complex provide a clear molecular basis for the observed binding specificity.
- The use of a tripartite split-fluorescence system to map the interaction interface is a clever and effective approach for high-throughput mutational analysis.
- The demonstration of HKU5 entry into cells expressing avian ACE2 is a notable finding that challenges the current understanding of host-virus associations for this coronavirus subgenus.
Weaknesses
- The discussion of fatty acid roles is somewhat speculative, as the authors acknowledge that pocket-disrupting mutations did not significantly impact pseudovirus entry efficiency.
- The manuscript relies heavily on in vitro assays, and the biological relevance of the observed avian ACE2 usage remains to be validated in natural settings.
- The structural comparison to other coronaviruses is informative but could be more explicitly linked to the observed differences in binding affinity.
Detailed comments
The authors claim that "fatty acid binding plays a role in stabilizing the closed conformation of the S protein, but is not essential for ACE2-mediated entry." While the structural data clearly show the presence of oleic and palmitic acid in the identified pockets, the functional data (Supplementary Fig. 5f, g) show no significant difference in entry efficiency between the wild-type and the fatty acid-binding mutants (SDM1 and SDM2). The authors should clarify whether this suggests that the closed state is not the dominant conformation under the specific conditions of the pseudovirus entry assay, or if the stabilization provided by these fatty acids is redundant in the presence of other stabilizing factors. A more nuanced discussion of the physiological relevance of these fatty acid pockets in the context of viral transmission would strengthen the paper.
Regarding the cross-species transmission risk, the authors state that "these findings provide functional evidence that avian ACE2 orthologs are not only structurally compatible but also operationally competent to mediate HKU5 infection." This is a strong claim. While the pseudovirus and cell-cell fusion assays are well-executed, they are performed in heterologous cell lines (Lenti-X 293T and Caco-2). The authors should explicitly acknowledge the limitations of these models in predicting actual zoonotic risk, particularly the absence of relevant host-specific factors (e.g., proteases like TMPRSS2, which are often required for efficient viral entry in vivo). The discussion should be tempered to emphasize that this is a receptor-level observation rather than a definitive assessment of the virus's ability to infect avian hosts.
Comments on figures
- Figure 1a: The cryo-EM map and atomic model show two distinct fatty acid densities. However, the text mentions that mass spectrometry identified oleic and palmitic acids. It is unclear how the authors definitively assigned oleic acid to pocket 1 and palmitic acid to pocket 2 based solely on the density shape. Please clarify if this assignment was based on the MS data alone or if there was additional structural evidence (e.g., density fit statistics) to distinguish the two.
- Figure 3d: The relative sfGFP fluorescence intensity for the K519A mutant is shown to be significantly reduced. This is a critical residue for the interaction. The authors should provide the raw fluorescence data or a representative histogram in the supplement to ensure that the decrease in MFI is not due to a reduction in the expression level of the mutant RBD, as the tripartite system relies on the expression of three separate plasmids.
- Figure 4e: The entry of HKU5 S pseudovirus into cells expressing Ps ACE2 is robust, but the bar for 'Human' ACE2 is significantly lower, comparable to the empty vector control. The authors state that "the spillover risk of HKU5 to human is currently low." It would be beneficial to include a positive control in this experiment (e.g., a virus known to use human ACE2) to confirm that the human ACE2 construct is functional and expressed at levels comparable to the bat and avian orthologs.
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Reviewer 2
gemini-3.1-flash-liteThis manuscript presents a structural and functional characterization of the HKU5 coronavirus spike protein, detailing its closed conformation stabilized by fatty acids and its unique interaction with the ACE2 receptor of the bat Pipistrellus abramus. The authors further extend their findings to demonstrate that the ACE2 ortholog from the avian species Pitta sordida can also serve as a functional receptor for HKU5, a finding that challenges the conventional understanding of host-virus associations. The structural work is technically sound, utilizing cryo-EM to resolve the spike trimer and the RBD-receptor complex. While the study is an incremental advance in the context of coronavirus receptor usage, it provides a well-executed, rigorous investigation of HKU5 host adaptation. The conclusions regarding zoonotic risk are appropriately framed as speculative but supported by the provided in vitro data.
Strengths
- High-resolution cryo-EM structures of both the closed HKU5 spike trimer and the RBD-ACE2 complex provide clear, actionable insights into the molecular basis of receptor recognition.
- Comprehensive functional validation using both pseudovirus entry and cell-cell fusion assays across multiple ACE2 orthologs strengthens the biological relevance of the structural findings.
- The identification of a novel fatty acid binding pocket in the HKU5 RBD adds to the growing understanding of how these molecules regulate spike conformational dynamics.
Weaknesses
- The manuscript claims that 'HKU5 has the potential to cross the species barrier' and that avian species may serve as 'potential conduits for cross-class transmission' based solely on in vitro receptor binding, which may overstate the ecological risk.
- The discussion of fatty acid roles is somewhat contradictory; the authors state that 'fatty acid binding plays a role in stabilizing the closed conformation', yet their mutational data show 'no significant differences in entry efficiency', leaving the physiological necessity of these pockets for viral fitness unclear.
- The evolutionary analysis relies on a limited set of sequences, and the claim that 'HKU5 has evolved a broader receptor usage than previously appreciated' is based on a single avian ACE2 ortholog, which may not be representative of broader avian susceptibility.
Detailed comments
The authors state that 'HKU5 can exploit ACE2 orthologs across species, providing molecular insights into its host adaptation and underscoring the importance of surveillance for this virus and its zoonotic risk.' While the structural and biochemical data clearly establish that HKU5 RBD can bind to Pitta sordida ACE2, the leap to 'zoonotic risk' and 'conduits for cross-class transmission' is significant. The authors should temper these claims by acknowledging that receptor binding is only one of many barriers to cross-species transmission, and that the absence of evidence for natural infection in these avian species remains a critical gap. A more nuanced discussion of the barriers (e.g., TMPRSS2 usage, intracellular replication factors) would strengthen the manuscript.
Regarding the fatty acid binding sites, the authors note that 'disruption of these interactions in HKU5 induces a structural shift toward a more relaxed conformation' but also report that 'pseudoviruses carrying either WT S or the fatty acid binding site mutants... revealed no significant differences in entry efficiency.' This discrepancy suggests that while the closed state is stabilized by these lipids, it is not a bottleneck for entry in the cell culture models used. The authors should explicitly discuss why this might be the case—for example, whether the experimental conditions (e.g., high expression levels, use of TPCK-trypsin) bypass the regulatory role of these fatty acids, or if the 'relaxed' conformation is still competent for receptor engagement.
Comments on figures
- Figure 3a: The BLI sensorgrams show a clear binding trend, but the dissociation phase for the HKU5-related/PaPD complex (far right) appears to have a very slow off-rate compared to the others. Please clarify if the KD calculation accounts for this potential heterogeneity in binding kinetics, or if the global fit used is appropriate for these curves.
- Figure 4c: The pseudovirus entry assay for PaACE2 mutants shows significant reductions for W327A, R328A, and D329A, which is consistent with the structural data. However, the error bars for the 'Vector' control are quite large relative to the mean. Please confirm the number of biological replicates and whether this variance is typical for this assay system in your lab.
- Figure 4e: The entry of HKU5 into PsACE2-expressing cells is robust, but the bar for 'Human' ACE2 is shown as significantly lower than P.abr and P.sor. Given that the text mentions human ACE2 as a potential receptor, please clarify if the observed signal is truly negligible or just significantly reduced compared to the bat/avian orthologs.
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Reviewer 3
gemini-flash-lite-latestThis manuscript presents the cryo-EM structures of the HKU5 spike protein in a closed conformation and its receptor-binding domain (RBD) in complex with the ACE2 peptidase domain (PD) from the bat Pipistrellus abramus. The authors identify fatty acid binding pockets that stabilize the closed spike state and characterize the unique binding interface between HKU5 RBD and ACE2. Furthermore, they extend their analysis to show that the ACE2 ortholog from the avian species Pitta sordida can support HKU5 entry, suggesting a broader potential host range than previously assumed. The study combines structural biology, biochemistry, and virology to provide a comprehensive view of HKU5 receptor recognition and evolutionary adaptation. The work is technically sound, well-executed, and provides valuable insights into the zoonotic risk of this understudied coronavirus.
Strengths
- High-resolution cryo-EM structures of the HKU5 spike and RBD-ACE2 complexes provide clear molecular insights into receptor recognition.
- The integration of structural data with functional pseudovirus entry and cell-cell fusion assays provides strong evidence for the cross-species potential of HKU5.
- The identification of a novel fatty acid binding pocket in the HKU5 RBD adds to the understanding of coronavirus spike conformational regulation.
Weaknesses
- The functional significance of the fatty acid binding pockets remains somewhat ambiguous, as the authors acknowledge that pocket-disrupting mutations did not significantly affect pseudovirus entry.
- The discussion of avian ACE2 potential relies on in vitro overexpression systems, and the manuscript could more clearly delineate the limitations of extrapolating these findings to natural infection scenarios.
- The manuscript lacks a detailed explanation of why the HKU5 RBD-Ps PD complex was more challenging to solve, beyond a brief mention of reduced affinity.
Detailed comments
The authors state that 'fatty acid binding plays a role in stabilizing the closed conformation of the S protein, but is not essential for ACE2-mediated entry.' While the structural evidence for the fatty acid binding is convincing, the functional data (Supplementary Fig. 5f, g) show no significant difference in entry efficiency for the SDM1 and SDM2 mutants. It would be beneficial for the authors to discuss whether these fatty acids might play a more significant role in vivo, perhaps in the context of immune evasion or stability in the environment, rather than just receptor binding, to better justify the biological relevance of these pockets.
Regarding the cross-species analysis, the authors claim that 'these findings provide functional evidence that avian ACE2 orthologs are not only structurally compatible but also operationally competent to mediate HKU5 infection.' This is a strong claim. Given that the study uses an overexpression system in Lenti-X 293T and Caco-2 cells, it would be appropriate to include a caveat in the discussion that receptor compatibility is only one of many barriers to cross-species transmission, and that the 'potential for cross-species transmission' should be interpreted with caution until further ecological or live-virus studies are conducted.
Comments on figures
- Figure 3a: The BLI sensorgrams show a clear binding trend, but the dissociation curves for some variants (e.g., HKU5-related/PaPD) appear to have a high degree of noise or incomplete dissociation. Please confirm if the KD values reported are robust across multiple independent replicates and if the fitting model used accounts for potential mass transport limitations.
- Figure 4b: The bar chart shows the relative sfGFP fluorescence intensity for various Pa PD mutants. The error bars for several mutants (e.g., W327A, R328A) are quite large relative to the mean. Please clarify if the statistical significance (e.g., P < 0.0001) is calculated against the WT Pa PD control and if the observed reductions are consistent across the three independent experiments mentioned in the methods.
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